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-**Kethi City** is the western-most settlement in [[:Sehto]] with a very rural feel to it despite
+**Kethi City** is the western-most settlement in [[:Sehto]] with a very rural feel to it despite its name suggesting an urban environment. It is a sea-side resort and mostly residential town with a fairly laid-back atmosphere. It's population count hovers comfortable around the twelve-hundred inhabitants mark, though there are many tourists visiting this area, renowned for its beautiful white sand beaches, so at any one time, up to three thousand people live in the confines of the city.
-its name suggesting an urban environment. It is a sea-side resort and mostly residential town with
-a fairly laid-back atmosphere. It's population count hovers comfortable around the twelve-hundred inhabitants
-mark, though there are many tourists visiting this area, renowned for its beautiful white sand beaches,
-so at any one time, up to three thousand people live in the confines of the city.
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 Collected from [[plot:Arsaga]]:
-It's late afternoon as they arrive back home, passing the sign reading "Welcome to Kethi City!" in
+It's late afternoon as they arrive back home, passing the sign reading "Welcome to Kethi City!" in weathered fake handwriting, the worn sign containing a sketchy map of the town, with the beach strips marked for the occasional tourist. Of course, they didn't need a map - though Devi is wide-eyed of curiosity, hands clung to the straps of her backpack, curious about yet another unexplored fraction of Sehto.
-weathered fake handwriting, the worn sign containing a sketchy map of the town, with the beach strips
-marked for the occasional tourist. Of course, they didn't need a map - though Devi is wide-eyed of
+Collected from the [[plot:public]] run:
-curiosity, hands clung to the straps of her backpack, curious about yet another unexplored fraction
-of Sehto.
+It may not be the most pristine afternoon in Kethi, with the light of the sun polluted by thin veils of clouds hovering in the sky, dimming it down just enough to be noticable and irritating - but that comes with the benefit of a fairly quiet day, having mostly muted the usual gaggle of children.
+Of course, not everyone is interested in Kethi's beaches - at least not the ones that attract the tourists to Kethi. In the rockier reaches of Kethi's north, Eli finds himself warily watching a newcomer clamber across the rocks at quite a distance, stabbing through her with something of a secluded glare, not yet decided whether to rise to his feet and ask what she was doing on //his// beach, when the silence is broken.
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