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-**Devi Ravi** is an inhabitant of [[place:Togi]] and sister to [[character:Dejan Ravi]].
+**Devi Ravi** is an inhabitant of [[place:Togi]], sister to [[character:Dejan Ravi]] and daughter to //Prana Ravi// and //Ishar Ravi//.
 ===== Personality =====
-...
+Devi is a girl of actions //and// words. Prone to acting and speaking before thinking, Devi is known as something of a hothead, extroverted and stubborn. She has a strict code of ethics that she demands other people adhere to, without that they're ever publicised, and any presumed breaches are met with venom and an attempt to interfere. On good days, this means she exhibits commendable civil courage. On bad days, it makes her a vicious opponent.
+Despite her extroversion and strong collection of opinions (that extend well beyond just the topic of ethics), she frequently proves she has an open mind by being a great source of level-headed, unassuming advice - but one does need to speak to her in private to get it.
+She has a low tolerance for bullshit and will call it out if she encounters it.
 ===== Appearance =====
-Shoulder-length black and copper hair gives her the impression of being a red-head, melting to a
+Shoulder-length black and copper hair gives her the impression of being a red-head, melting to a dark red impression at distance. She keeps the mostly straight hair tied up in a hair grip, the strands spiking out to all sides from it. Her eyes share the colour of her hair, maroon with speckled hints of copper streaking and darker patches, though appearing mostly uniform.
-dark red impression at distance. She keeps the mostly straight hair tied up in a hair grip, the
-strands spiking out to all sides from it. Her eyes share the colour of her hair, maroon with speckled
-hints of copper streaking and darker patches, though appearing mostly uniform.
-She's built fairly thinly, superficially seeming almost delicate, though her face breaks the gothic
+She's built fairly thinly, superficially seeming almost delicate, though her face breaks the gothic frame by being fairly round with a hint of very faded freckles at height of her cheek bones.
-frame by being fairly round with a hint of very faded freckles at height of her cheek bones.
-Her facial skin is slightly cratered with wide pores - no doubt due to childhood acne in combination
+Her facial skin is slightly cratered with wide pores - no doubt due to childhood acne in combination with an obsessive compulsive scratching thereof - but it doesn't detract from her charming and perhaps even beautiful exterior. Her pale lips are never enhanced with lipstick, though she has a hint of red eyeshadow further underlining the crimson theme.
-with an obsessive compulsive scratching thereof - but it doesn't detract from her charming and
-perhaps even beautiful exterior. Her pale lips are never enhanced with lipstick, though she has a
-hint of red eyeshadow further underlining the crimson theme.
-While she wears black, nothing about her hints at a sinister or faux-sinister personality - a
+While she wears black, nothing about her hints at a sinister or faux-sinister personality - a wine-red shirt peeks out from under a black cloth jacket that seems to balance itself quite effortlessly between formality and casual, trendy style, with two function-less white laces tracing down from the open ends of its collar to her front, one on each side, reaching approximately halfway down her torso.
-wine-red shirt peeks out from under a black cloth jacket that seems to balance itself quite
-effortlessly between formality and casual, trendy style, with two function-less white laces
-tracing down from the open ends of its collar to her front, one on each side, reaching approximately
-halfway down her torso.
-Her trousers tend to be a pair that she's grown to love: a thin pair of slightly reflective fabric,
+Her trousers tend to be a pair that she's grown to love: a thin pair of slightly reflective fabric, with four rectangular platinum-coloured metal pieces woven on their wide, top end into the outside of the trousers at height of her ankles, two on each leg, above each other.
-with four rectangular platinum-coloured metal pieces woven on their wide, top end into the outside
-of the trousers at height of her ankles, two on each leg, above each other.
-Depending on the weather she wears a pair of sturdy black and dark brown sandals or a pair of black
+Depending on the weather she wears a pair of sturdy black and dark brown sandals or a pair of black sneakers with silver detailing.
-sneakers with silver detailing.
-Her most constant companion is her backpack, which seems to have a hue as if someone had taken a
+Her most constant companion is her backpack, which seems to have a hue as if someone had taken a painting of her and dissolved its components into a single medely of colour, a slightly dirty, perplexing colour doing the splits somewhere between black and a metallic hue not quite gold and not quite copper.
-painting of her and dissolved its components into a single medely of colour, a slightly dirty,
-perplexing colour doing the splits somewhere between black and a metallic hue not quite gold and
-not quite copper.
 ===== Pokémon =====
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    * [[pokémon:Gramini]] (Nidorino)
    * [[pokémon:Holocaust]] (Arcanine)
-   * [[pokémon:Khukuri]] (Tauretal)
+   * [[pokémon:Khukuri]] ([[species:Tauretal]])
    * [[pokémon:Viracocha]] (Persian)
    * [[pokémon:Saccharine]] ([[species:Sundisquama]])
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 [[plot:Arsaga]] continuity:
-Devi Ravi went on the gym circuit prior to meeting Nikki Arsaga, but "//had to turn back when the floods
+Devi Ravi went on the gym circuit prior to meeting Nikki Arsaga, but "//had to turn back when the floods washed away large parts of Route 59.//" She possessed the HM //Strength//.
-washed away large parts of Route 59.//" She possessed the HM //Strength//.
 ===== Descriptions from Sessions =====
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 The fingers curl against those knees, gasps still prominent, laced through the words that then surface, accompanied by a single, awkward step forward as if catching her balance. "Please, please, I need help, my brother..." Uproar? Understatement. Those are tears in her eyes, glittering dangerously, about to fall. That left hand rises, outstretched index finger cutting through the air, hand cast back to point up road into the direction she'd come running from. "We need a healer, he... someone is with him, but we need better help than that..." She seems to struggle for a pause, briefly, wincing silently as if her throat were strained from just those few words. "A hospital - or a healer pokémon. Where is former? Or do you have one - a healer?" Scattered and broken though her voice and thoughts may be, her voice hints at something authorative, as though it were not in the least natural for her to be in this dissolved.
+{{tag>[work-in-progress]}}